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Glayden Place: Book Two: Part Four
I turned Luke into a human again, but he BEGGED to go back to Glayden Place. Data said, "why not?" Snow dove us there, but Snake's house was broken and burnt. "Don't go near there! It's still on fire!" Snow said, holding Daniel to her chest. Data stayed back, and so did Luke, but I didn't. "Lake, you get back here right this instant!" Snow yelled. "Or else what? You're gonna break my wand?" Luke tried not to laugh. I splashed on a blue orb from my hand as it leaked in and the house was just a pile of broken wood, smoke, and ash. "Is that a person?" Daniel asked, running from Snow. I squinted and saw a tangirl with long, thick blond hair. "Don't worry! I'm coming to get you!" Daniel yelled and ran towards her. Wood bit her lip and turned a bright shade of red. She was on fire, apperentley. With jealousy. I dodged some flying pieces on wood and held my breath and saw the girl. "I think she's unconcious," he said. "No, really?" I sent another orb and she was wet and awake. "Water!" She screamed and wiped it off with Daniel's shirt. Wold was now purple. "Who are you?" The girl asked. "I'm... Lake?" I said, just a tad bit confused about the water freak-out. "I'm–" "Taken." Wood interrupted. I covered my mouth to prevent myself from laughing. "Daniel." He finished. "I'm Ari." The girl said, brushing the ash off of her tank top. "Where are your parents?" Snow asked. "I have parents?" She asked. Wood laughed. Nobody else did. "What are you doing here?" Daniel asked. "I don't know!" She said and took a silver wand from her back jean pocket and cleaned herself up with a spell. "You're a wizard too?" Wood asked. "Duh!" Ari said. I laughed. I flashed them back to Snow's house where she made herself comfy. "So, exactly, how old are you?" Data asked, raising an eyebrow. "23." She said. Then laughed. "Nah, I'm kidding. I'm..." she looked at her Lost Child ID. "13." She finished. Wood was raging with anger. I put a truth spell on her. "Well, we have no intention of keeping you whatsover, so flash yourself back to Loserville and we won't visit!" She exclaimed. I think we heard enough. I took the spell off of her, and she flashed herself tp her house. I sighed and thought that was enough honesty for today. I COULDN'T WAIT FOR ANOTHER REVIEW :) SORRY! THANKS ARI! YOUR GONNA SHOW UP IN TONS OF PARTS! PART FIVE HARRY STYLES RES. 1! ♚Alaina♚
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