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Most Helpful Favorable Review

16 out of 18 people found this review helpful.

Yay

Great story, with a short, quick plot, interesting ending, and overall good writing, this book is a must read.

posted by 11393562 on September 29, 2012

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13 out of 14 people found this review helpful.

Great premise and story, but the poor grammar and punctuation re

Great premise and story, but the poor grammar and punctuation really killed this story for me.  

posted by bonsai9933 on February 17, 2013

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  • Posted February 3, 2013

    I think the premise was good, but I don't think the execution wa

    I think the premise was good, but I don't think the execution was good. The dialogue was very stilted. And it just didn't feel natural. I understand it was a short story, but there was nothing to make you want to keep reading.

    5 out of 5 people found this review helpful.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted April 28, 2014

    Overall...

    The story was good but it could have been more longer and more interesting. The grammar really bothered me and the way it was confusing at the end so that is why I give it that rate. Spoiler Alert: The Watchers were really mean at the end.

    0 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted March 2, 2014

    Amateurish

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  • Anonymous

    Posted September 22, 2013

    OK

    So where is the rest of the book? Keep writting very good 11pages.

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    Posted October 22, 2012

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    Posted February 12, 2013

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