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15 out of 16 people found this review helpful.
posted by AnthC on July 6, 2012Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
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13 out of 14 people found this review helpful.
The author could have used some editing in a few places. His language is well-used for the most part, so when the word "tit" is used so casually in a couple of places instead of "breast", it's kind of jarring and very off-putting. Things like that will jar me out of the story and lessen my enjoyment of the actual story line.
All in all, very good.
posted by mammajammaNM on September 2, 2012Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
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