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Posted March 26, 2014
There aren't many books that I can't finish, but after 96 pages I just couldn't make myself read any more.
I didn't like the main characters at all, and they were poorly developed. The female character was constantly crying when nothing was happening, and had "issues" for no good reason. The male character was super annoying, and you never really knew anything about him as a person.
The plot drove me nuts; I kept waiting for something to happen but it never did. Other milestones happened, like when the couple fell in love, and you never saw it coming becauseit wasn't properly developed. A random guy shows up, says a few cheesy lines, controls your life, demands your attention, and buys expensive gifts so you're in love in a week? No thanks.
Subject-verb agreement was inconsistent throughout the book, verb tense changed constantly, puntuation was misused, and words were misspelled, making for a very frustrating read.
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Posted March 22, 2014