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Posted April 12, 2014
Cute quirky story, but needs serious editing
A Navy Seal,on special assignment while recovering from serious injuries,meets a quirky and beautiful dog walker who is recovering from prior career and interpersonal failures. This romantic comedy is centered in San Francisco and inludes a romantic side trip to Napa vineyards.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
While the story line was good and included some strongly written scenes between enjoyable characters, I am not sure if this was the final edited version of the book or an earlier rough draft. It would be greatly improved after serious editing,because there were numerous mispellings or incorrect wordings, poor grammar and punctuation errors, and the story line was disjointed as if sections had been moved around by copy and paste edits without deleting the alternate text placements which resulted in excessive repetition of phrases. I highly recommend the book be edited and the plot tightened up.