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Posted March 30, 2013
I try to begin books with an open mind, but I was unable to fini
I try to begin books with an open mind, but I was unable to finish the first chapter. With over- punctuation, run-on sentences, and a generally poor flow, I wasn't able to develop an interest in the plot. Perhaps there is an excellent story buried in the unreadable text, but I'm not a bit tempted to try and find it in the book's current form.
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