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9 out of 10 people found this review helpful.
Great read, full book (336 pages)
UK authors write slightly differently than Americans, so while some of the characters weren't exactly what I expected, it is probably due to the slight cultural difference.
Set in Australia, so that was different. But, the characters stayed in character, and because...Read More
Set in Australia, so that was different. But, the characters stayed in character, and because...Read More
UK authors write slightly differently than Americans, so while some of the characters weren't exactly what I expected, it is probably due to the slight cultural difference.
Set in Australia, so that was different. But, the characters stayed in character, and because it is non-American, there was a lot less of the extra drama some American writers seem to like putting into simple, everyday situations.
Strong heroine. The only thing I didn't care for was the keeping secrets of her past for a 'surprise reveal' practically at the end of the book. That's annoying. Just reveal the secrets, and make the dealing with them part of the plot. Makes for a stronger plot, and less of the constant wondering, "Well, good grief, why would they do THAT??!"
Overall tho, a good read. One which I will probably read again.Show Less
Set in Australia, so that was different. But, the characters stayed in character, and because it is non-American, there was a lot less of the extra drama some American writers seem to like putting into simple, everyday situations.
Strong heroine. The only thing I didn't care for was the keeping secrets of her past for a 'surprise reveal' practically at the end of the book. That's annoying. Just reveal the secrets, and make the dealing with them part of the plot. Makes for a stronger plot, and less of the constant wondering, "Well, good grief, why would they do THAT??!"
Overall tho, a good read. One which I will probably read again.Show Less
posted by MzDallas on March 3, 2012
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18 out of 21 people found this review helpful.
Good Promising outline
Promising outline but the story wasn't flushed out well. Super cheesy, poor dialogue, too fast pacing, and unrealistic actions by the characters.
posted by Anonymous on December 27, 2011
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Anonymous
Posted December 27, 2011
Good Promising outline
Promising outline but the story wasn't flushed out well. Super cheesy, poor dialogue, too fast pacing, and unrealistic actions by the characters.
18 out of 21 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted December 26, 2011
Same storyline, Different Author
The grammar and editing was God awful! The storyline is
really good in theory, but the writer butchered it. Tizzy really just started to become annoying, Grant was weak, and Branson was creepy and pushy! There was a line said by Grant, "Becky, girl,...". I dont know any convincingly straight guy that says "girl". I tried so hard to like it but i couldnt push myself to continue past pg 176. It came to the point where i didnt even care what happened to the characters.12 out of 15 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted January 8, 2012
Ridiculous story!
Poorly written and ridiculous. It should be in the humor section because it actually made me laugh out loud several times!
10 out of 12 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted March 3, 2012
Great read, full book (336 pages)
UK authors write slightly differently than Americans, so while some of the characters weren't exactly what I expected, it is probably due to the slight cultural difference.
Set in Australia, so that was different. But, the characters stayed in character, and because it is non-American, there was a lot less of the extra drama some American writers seem to like putting into simple, everyday situations.
Strong heroine. The only thing I didn't care for was the keeping secrets of her past for a 'surprise reveal' practically at the end of the book. That's annoying. Just reveal the secrets, and make the dealing with them part of the plot. Makes for a stronger plot, and less of the constant wondering, "Well, good grief, why would they do THAT??!"
Overall tho, a good read. One which I will probably read again.9 out of 10 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted December 27, 2011
Good read
Good read but a little annoyed with the poor editing work.
8 out of 12 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted December 24, 2011
:)
Love this book!!
8 out of 12 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted December 26, 2011
Wonderful Love Story
If you can get past the grammatical errors and overlook how some parts seemed a bit rushed, you will truly enjoy this wonderfully romantic Cinderella story. The author should get some help editing and re-release, as the storyline is great.
7 out of 7 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted December 1, 2011
Sweet romance
Loved the story and characters. Some editing is still needed regarding punction, spelling, and grammer.
7 out of 9 people found this review helpful.
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Kassy50
Posted January 22, 2012
Very sweet
Very sweet and predictable romance. Nice, clean story
6 out of 6 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted February 14, 2012
No name
Is it ok for 13 year olds??????
4 out of 6 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted February 2, 2012
Good story
I really enjoyed the story, but it could really use some serious editing.
4 out of 4 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted March 4, 2012
Tear jerker!
Sweet, romantic, and a happy ending. I enjoyed
3 out of 4 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted March 1, 2012
...
there is one part that never gets answered....just who are those kids to her, and their father....
3 out of 3 people found this review helpful.
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bar-3
Posted February 29, 2012
Recommend for the romance readers everywhere.
I really enjoyed this book because I did not guess at the beginning how it would end. If you have ever felt like the girl no one would date this is a feel good book. It made me want to meet these people and tell them how nice they were. It also shows that some people in this world will still work hard and not complain. I hope to read more books by this writer. Loved the book from beginning to end!
3 out of 3 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted February 27, 2012
Edit, please!
This book was so badly in need of proper editing that I couldn't even finish it. There wasn't anything new or different about the story that the lack of editing made it a waste of time to read.
3 out of 5 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted February 27, 2012
Good
This story was really cute but sad. I love the concept but it was very predictable which is not always a bad thing. Few swear words about one every four chapters. Only a reference to intamacy and cute characters enjoy.
3 out of 3 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted February 23, 2012
Ughh
I liked the idea but the execution was horrible. I couldn't finish it. It didn't flow and the characters where unlikable.
3 out of 4 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted February 28, 2012
GREAT for quick read.
GREAT for quick read.
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted February 22, 2012
Loved it
It made me smile ...cute story
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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Anonymous
Posted February 22, 2012
Nice read
Yes so the editing was not perfect. It was not as bad as some have portrayed it to be. Especially for a "free" read. The story was nice and easy to follow. I for one enjoyed it for the romance and message.
2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.
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