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  • Anonymous

    Posted May 26, 2012

    After DF 1

    (After the dark forest attcks thunderclan.) Brambecw padded to the Moonpool. Jayfeather sat down the the edge of the pool. Jayfeather heard fur brush stone as Brambleclaw layed down beside the water. "Drink the water." Jayfeather meowed to Brambleclaw. Brambleclaw lapped up the water. Jayfeather crouched down and walked in Brambleclaws dream. Before he did he thought 'I hope I see Hollyleaf.' Jayfeathers sister had died in the Dark Forest war. Jayfeather leaped into Brambleclaws dream. In the dream Jayfeather hid in the bushes. They were at the island were the Clans met at the full moon. Brambleclaw was standing in the clearing alone. Suddnly the stars above them started to swirl around. They seemed to loop to the ground. Once the reached the ground they dissappeared and in their place were cats. Yellowfang, Goldenflower, Hollyleaf, Feathertail, Bluestar, Whitestorm, Mousefur and Ferncloud. Last of all was Firestar. They crowded in a circle around Brambleclaw. More StarClan cats arrived. Once they were all there all the cats meowed as one. "Welcome Brambleclaw. Are you ready?" They meowed as on Jayfeather stared at the crowed searching them for familer faces. "Yes." Brambleclaw meowed. Jayfeather could tell he was trying not to sound weak. "I'm ready." Goldenflower came foreward. She was a pale ginger she cat with amber eyes like Brambleclaw. "Goldenflower!" Brambleclaw exclaimed. Goldenflower stayed silent. She touched her nose to his. "With this life i give you protection. Use it to protect your Clan as a mother protects her kits." She meowed. Brambleclaw closed his eyes and stiffened as th life flowed through him. Goldenflower padded back to the crowed and melted in. The next cat was Hollyleaf. Jayfeather forced himslef to stay where he was. "With this life i give you courage." She whispered. "Use it well in defense of your Clan." Brambleclaw stared at Hollyleaf. She touched her nose to his head. Brambleclaw stiffened again. As Hollyleaf padded back again he called,"Wait do you have a message?" But she ignored him. The third cat was Ashfur. "With this life i give you justice. Use it well to judge the actions of your Clanmates." He meowed. He pressed his nose to Brambleclaws head. This time brambleclaw seemed prepared for whatever he felt. The fourth was Ferncloud. "With this life i give you loyalty. Use it to guide your Clan in times of trouble." She touched her nose to his. Brambleclaw shook his pelt once the pain seemed to be gone. Another cat came foreward. Runningwind. The name flashed in Jayfeathers mind. "With this life i give you tireless energy. Use it to carry out the duties if a leader." Brambleclaw just closed his eyes. The sixth cat was Yellowfang. "With this life i give you mentoring. Use it to train the young cats of the Clan." She rasped as she touched her nose to his. Cinderpelt came foreward. "With this life i give you love. Use it well for the cats in your care." She whispered. The next cat with Feathertail. "With this lifei give you compassion. Use it for the elders of the Clan the sick and the ones weaker then you." Brambleclaw stiffened as thoigh unprepared. Firestar stepped foreward. "Welcome Brambleclaw. My apprenrice my warrior and my deputy. I always knew you would make a good leader." Brambleclaw bowed his head. "With this life i give you nobility. Use it well to lead your Clan." At this Jayfeather left the dream. (Next post in the second book.)

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