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Posted October 25, 2010
The "idea" of this book is good
Like I said, the "idea" of this book is good. There are many things that could have made it better. Unfortunately...The plot is not well-developed. Characters aren't either. The writing style is amateurish. There is little punctuation to show where one sentance ends or begins. There are tons of mispelled words. The books seems to have been written as an afterthought. At one point the ebook counts one paragraph as a full page. This goes on for maybe 5+ pages. (I hope this was just a fluke limited to my Nook and not how it was meant to be!) I paid for this book, and no, I def do not think it was worth it. I also bought two other books by the same author. I can only hope they are better than this one.
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Posted September 19, 2012
I find the writing level of this book very immature, a middle school level. If you don't mind reading children's books please enjoy.
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