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Posted August 31, 2013
I did read the entire book, but like another reviewer stated, I
I did read the entire book, but like another reviewer stated, I was glad it was free. It was disjointed, and it an odd beginning, with the main character eating in a restaurant by herself, but then the tone and direction of the book changed nearly 180 degrees. Disjointed, improper usage of semi-colons (really nagged me), and the author could not make up her mind if she wanted to be a semi-comedy or a drama, and it was really neither. The only reason I gave it two stars is she did have some good ideas, or at least I thought so, but she just did not execute them well.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted August 7, 2013
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