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Anonymous
Posted April 24, 2006
How Silly.
I'm actually reviewing the book here this isn't a critique of the nature of this publication. I downloaded this from the author's website, just out of curiosity. I am a Star Wars fan but don't read much Star Wars fanfic. Jareo's biography states that she has 'written technical manuals, [and] how-to articles for the manufacturing technology sector', and that's how this reads. There is more technobabble than in a licensed Star Wars novel. Descriptions are excessively loaded with 'technological' details, which results in pages and pages of pure exposition. Also, some of her details are flat-out wrong. There is no 'Star Fleet' in Star Wars, that's a Star Trek organization. The relevant equivalent here is the Imperial Navy. All debate of copyright infringement aside, this novel is not at all interesting.
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Anonymous
Posted April 30, 2006
dumb
while alternate universe fanfiction is all well and good, it certainly doesn't belong on the market. George Lucas is going to have a field day with this one... and it's not even good fanfiction, so no one will object.
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