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Posted March 27, 2013
This book has three big flaws. The first is the typos - here we
This book has three big flaws. The first is the typos - here were enough of them to pull me out of the story. The second was continuity - in one instance, two characters meet, and then about 10 pages later, one of those asked a third character about the first one and says he never met that person. The third issue was characters - there were too many. This book was chalk full of so many references to people and name dropping and craziness that I could not keep track of who knew whom and what when. Fourth - too much arbitrary death. It's a fine plot device to propel the story forward but man, people were dying right and left for no actual reason. I do think this author has potential, and would be willing to read another book once she worked out some of the kinks. Otherwise, this was a bit of a mess.
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