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Posted July 18, 2013
So many grammatical and story errors, it had my head spinning from simple things like using the word wonder instead of wander. And then going back and forth from calling it Glimmer Magazine to Shimmer ?? so which is it Glimmer or Shimmer? Misspellings and just overall all awful editing . Its a shame because its a good story but such a turn off with all the writing errors. And in the beginning when she supposedly crashes into a chest of steel and he has hold of her arm, but he's got her back to her?? how do you slam into someone's chest but they have their back to you?? but then you can look up and see their eyes ?? very very confusingWas this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.