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Caution: Tram Approaching

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  • Anonymous

    Posted February 28, 2013

    Needs work

    Big hole in the story tracking the suspect to the island, unresolved ending and too abrupt. There are many many spelling mistakes such as do and due, ally and alley, etc that look sophomoric and are very distracting. A name change from Daniel to Victor was not consistently applied to the character while being edited. Grammar mistakes. Unlikely behavior by the college student. Not ready for public consumption but could be fixed to make a plausible and exciting story.

    2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted April 13, 2013

    Don't bother

    Besides the fact that every page needs editing, (some need an entire rewrite, there are so many blatant mistakes!) the dialogue is totally unrealistic, the characters are cheesy, and because of name misprints, the story gets kind of confusing. Then all of a sudden everything is conveniently wrapped up, which makes for an utterly disappointing ending. But hey, at least it was free.

    1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted July 16, 2013

    Caution

    Sure wish I had read reviews before I read the book. It was probably a good story, but I couldn' t get past the numerous spelling and gramatical

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