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Posted June 27, 2012
I think CAPITAL was lacking in most areas - adventure, mystery, intrigue, drama.
The language was crude. Suspense was simply not there.
There were too many characters involved for just one book.
That said, the characters were, however, very well defined and separated
so it was not that hard to recount who was being discussed.
The author has talent but needs to add a smooth flow and energy to his writing.
Many of us would appreciate 'cleaner' language. It can be accomplished by tactfully alluding to the words and crses without actually using them.
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