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Posted May 29, 2012
The leading male character is not developed well. The relations
The leading male character is not developed well. The relationship between the two lead characters is not developed and it is rushed. Beginning of book difficulty to follow characters as it moves from the leading feamil to the leading male then the rest of the book is strictly the leading femail. Story was good but not given enough time to develop.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.