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Posted May 19, 2011
This right here is the reason I wish we could do refunds. The book is 62 pages and such a giant waste of money. The writer obviously doesn't have a clue when it comes to the craft as this reads like a junior high girl's diary: jumpy, sporadic and senseless. There are tense changes, grammatical errors and the whole thing is telling with only maybe three showing scenes. Granted, it is an accurate portrayal of how many girls are swept up in the life, but it could be done so much better. I wouldn't pay over $0.99 for it, and that's a stretch. Don't waste your money.
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Posted February 2, 2011
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