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Posted June 11, 2013
This was a good book, but when you're writing a romantic love story it needs to move slowly. Like this guy(the main character) Andrew kissed(the next main character) Emma within two days of acknowledgement of each other. Plus, this girl, Emma, is suppose to be quiet, so you wouldn't expect her to have her first kiss with this guy within two days. So, if you ask me, the writer was in a hurry to write this book. My advice to the author, write a romance book where/when things move more slowly to catch the readers attention. But not too slowly of-course.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.