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Posted October 23, 2011
Unpolished, but entertaining
It's a brisk read, and moves well, but I'm afraid the word that best describes it is "amateurish." There were some nice details; for example, the evolution of the protagonist's suit of armor were interesting and imaginative, especially the final iteration (I'll leave it at that -- don't want to give anything away here). However, the narrative voice is uneven, the world building is not very well realized, and there are typos galore. It was worth the 99 cents I paid for it, but not much more.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted December 16, 2014
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