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Posted June 22, 2012
Sketch of a Novel
Good premise for a story, but the book has no real substance. A lot of action takes place "off camera," so to speak. And if you are reading this for the sex scenes or D/s scenes, they are seriously lame. No emotional tension between hero and heroine. The book reads as if the author didn't want to take the time to expand, edit, or revise.
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