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Posted April 17, 2013
Started off OK, got worse - much, much worse! Characters whose p
Started off OK, got worse - much, much worse! Characters whose personalities change from book to book,
plot holes you could drive a truck through, and whole areas of the story missing, so it doesn't make sense!
The author has absolutely no grasp of basic grammar (e,g, 'drug' used as the past of 'to drag'! Really!!).
I'm stunned that any of these books actually got published!!
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Posted January 8, 2014
In need of better editing
I's ??? Not even a word but it appears through out the first story. This error and the numerous paragraphs that are made up of one rambling thirty word sentence, BEG for an educated editor. I found myself having to reread parts on practically every page, moving/adding punctuation until it made sense. Not even close to Evanovich.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted March 31, 2013
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