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Posted February 22, 2013
The premise of this story is good, but the execution wanders in
The premise of this story is good, but the execution wanders in too many directions to keep up with. We hear a lot more extraneous details about random characters than about the action, so when it winds up, the reader is left saying, "What? But what about...?"Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.