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Posted September 24, 2011
Fun but flawed
A good story marred by a lack of editing. The author has the bones of a good plot with adequate complexity to keep the reader interested. This is offset by some very strange sentence construction and awkward dialog. All in all a good effort that could be improved by the application of a red pencil to the manuscript. I would gladly read more by this author!
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Posted November 30, 2010
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