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Posted September 22, 2013
This story starts off one way and ends up somewhere completely
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This story starts off one way and ends up somewhere completely unexpected. You're drawn into the action right from the start. Johno, an ex-cop, is now working as a valet when the very reason he's now an ex-cop drives up. This starts off a chain of events and we're swept along for the ride.
In just a few short pages the author brings us to the edge of our seats and then pulls the rug out from under us (to mix a few metaphors). This is a tight, descriptive short story and well worth a read.
Thanks to the author for making this available free for review.