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Posted December 15, 2012
Rough draft at best
I did not enjoy this story. The author throws in details late in the story in order to make up coming parts work. Does not allow his parent characters to visit any realistic emotion about the death of a child yet repeatedly mourns the loss of a friend who in the begining of the story isnt nearly as close a friend as he and his wife are by the end. Inconsistent. Outrageously unbelievable at nearly every turn. Not because the story is exceptionly imaginative but because it isnt. Nothing flows. Its like a b movie.
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