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Posted October 11, 2013
Not a bad read but much of the dialog does little to further the story,
The author has a love story without making the reader feel any passion, a plot that is at best confused, and some characters that should have been very interesting had the reader exxperienced more about them than through their meaningless prattle.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
This author had the makings of an excellent novel, but left the characters relationships needing more development, a clearer idea of who did what to whom in a plot, and statements by characters that are essential to the plot of the story. The storys narrator was too chatty, too many filler senarios, too vague of plot.