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Anonymous
Posted February 15, 2013
Good but needs editing
Like the story and characters but its very short and desperstely needs an editor....
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Anonymous
Posted June 19, 2013
4.5 Stars
Would be 5 stars., if better editing. Such a great story -can't believe it was free. It does end as a cliff hanger, but unlike other books, the next one is also free. So much excitement and suspense, I couldn't put it down -read in one day. You will love all the character's. I couldn't decide who I want Evie to end up with. Highly Recommend! Ljb
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Anonymous
Posted May 4, 2013
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Abigail_S
Posted April 1, 2013
It's a good story line; however, sentences were formulated compl
It's a good story line; however, sentences were formulated completely incorrectly and punctuation was almost nonexistent. An editor is highly recommended! If you do decide to read it though, it is definitely worth the time!
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Anonymous
Posted March 20, 2013
Good
For free
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Anonymous
Posted March 18, 2013
Anonymous
Good.jas
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Anonymous
Posted February 20, 2013
Great read
I enjoyed this book. The reason i gave it 4 stars instead of 5 is because of the lack of punctuation and grammatical errors that made it difficult to understand at times. Also the way the author formulates sentences needs work. Needs an editor but still worth reading.
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Anonymous
Posted January 11, 2013
Deceptions
Good read
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Anonymous
Posted January 2, 2013
Good Read
The story was good enough to look past the grammatical errors.
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Anonymous
Posted December 28, 2012
Good
This read is really good. Yes, there are grammatical errors, but it's a free read. With that said, I thought that the book was awesome, cannot wait for the second one to see what happens next with the characters.
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Ashling
Posted December 28, 2012
Got to the first few pages and couldn't read any more. I feel li
Got to the first few pages and couldn't read any more. I feel like the grammatical errors wouldn't be noticeable to most people, but I couldn't deal with it.
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Anonymous
Posted December 7, 2012
Excellent
Excellent, story about not running from yourself, faceing life head on, with vampires, werewolves and witches.
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Anonymous
Posted November 22, 2012
awesome book
this book is hard to desribe but it is good in away that you just have to read with werewovles and vampire involed this book put them together were nothing is confused and every thing goes together perfectly.
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Anonymous
Posted April 26, 2013
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Posted December 16, 2012
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Anonymous
Posted June 10, 2013
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Posted May 9, 2013
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Posted March 5, 2013
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Anonymous
Posted January 18, 2013
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Anonymous
Posted March 11, 2013
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