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Posted July 15, 2013
Mildly Diverting Paranormal Romance
Miller's "Demand of the Dragon" is a passably entertaining shapeshifter romance. Lucy and Caleb are interesting characters, and their island home of Feralon is intriguing.
Unfortunately, the text is riddled with grammatical errors, typographical errors, and sentence fragments. Additionally, there are odd gaps in the plot; eg, if the dragons are ruled by a queen, why do males have the right to dictate who their female relatives will marry? And why did Tristan pick such a weakling as Geezer for Lucy? Also, why were only Caleb and Lucy looking for Tristan, and why was the unstable interdimensional portal in Lucy's ancestral home left unguarded for three years after Tristan disappeared through it? And other assorted problems.
Overall, this was a story with lots of potential, but it left me unsatisfied. -- lyradora
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