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Posted January 14, 2013
Another good story. PLEASE find a good proofreader.
I have purchased all of the books by Moats and will continue to buy his new books. However...run on sentences are found on just about every page in every book. Interjections and appositives are rarely punctuated correctly. After awhile those errors along with others really distract from the entertaining stories developed by Moats. Please find an editor who knows grammar.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted May 13, 2012