- Shopping Bag ( 0 items )
Posted May 9, 2011
Decent story, but too many flaws.
The basic idea was interesting, however the characters were not well developed and the dialogue was completely unrealistic. The writing was terrible - grammatical errors like "you're" instead of "your" on at least 4 occasions are unforgivable! However, I found myself drawn to the storyline, despite the awful writing. The ending felt rushed and not well developed - overall, I was let down.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.