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Fresh Temptation: Barboza Brothers: Book One

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Most Helpful Favorable Review

15 out of 15 people found this review helpful.

Loved it from start to finish. Victor was great I knew I was goi

Loved it from start to finish. Victor was great I knew I was going to like him from the second page. Cara was also great. I absolutely loved Isaac and the way the author used toddler speak for him so many authors use adult speech for kids. I busted out laughing when he ...
Loved it from start to finish. Victor was great I knew I was going to like him from the second page. Cara was also great. I absolutely loved Isaac and the way the author used toddler speak for him so many authors use adult speech for kids. I busted out laughing when he called Victor Big Toe the first time. What I liked most about Victor was that he wasn't petty or arrogant he wasn't ashamed of where he came from and he went after what he wanted. I thought it flowed really well I was never bored and have no unanswered questions and can't wait for the next Barboza brother.

posted by Joni78 on December 1, 2012

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8 out of 18 people found this review helpful.

Couldn't read

Whacked out font made me crazy

posted by 11461803 on January 26, 2013

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  • Anonymous

    Posted January 9, 2013

    I Also Recommend:

    Yes, this ebook was free but it was tough to get through. Normal

    Yes, this ebook was free but it was tough to get through. Normally you hope for an HEA (happily ever after) with couples but this pair had zero attraction. Single mother Cara Green, with low self-esteem, is the object of desire to go-getter, uber confident Victor Barboza. What was the attraction for Victor? Only Victor and the author know the answer! The love scenes lacked romance and eroticism. You get the impression that the sex between these two really was done within minutes! Oh the horror!

    3 out of 8 people found this review helpful.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted August 10, 2013

    Good thing it was free....

    As others have mentioned, the formatting is extremely distracting. I also didn't really feel any chemistry between the main characters.

    1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

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  • Posted January 6, 2013

    Horrible Editing

    The story itself was good for the story I'd give 4 stars, but the editing was horrible and very distracting.

    1 out of 3 people found this review helpful.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted November 22, 2014

    Different Read - anonymous

    It has been very difficult reading a book with little to no editing. Some lines were left out and it was very hard to figure out who was speaking - no tabs for each speaker. The entire book had absolutely no formatting and spacing of lines was not understandable. Would have been much better if formatted and edited like all others.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted August 2, 2014

    Just ok

    Not written well. Ok story line.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted May 29, 2014

    Okay

    The story was okay, but the format was annoying. I don't know why anyone would do that. Cara gets annoying towards the end because she is such a wimp. Victor is a control freak but in a nice way so i guess that makes it okay? Whatever.

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  • Posted February 23, 2014

    Found myself skimming the pages after a while. Book wasn't hold

    Found myself skimming the pages after a while. Book wasn't holdinh my attention at all.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted February 2, 2014

    Distacted

    That is how I felt. Trying to read a story that is poorly laid out distracts from the story it's self. Also I'm still trying to figure out what their attraction was. Oh well, it was fee.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted August 22, 2013

    It was okay...

    The story line wasn't bad but a little unrealistic. The writing wasn't great. The next book looks more interesting, but I'm debating whether to purchase it just because I wasn't impressed with this book.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted March 19, 2013

    Just ok

    Just ok read.

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