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Posted May 20, 2013
I should love this book, it is a mystery and is set in baseball.
I should love this book, it is a mystery and is set in baseball. But it drove me crazy. The author switched his point of view constantly, sometimes every few paragraphs. It made it difficult for me to keep the characters and their roles straight. To be honest, I am still not sure why one of the investigators was there other than his friendship with the umpire. The author clearly knows how to write, had a story laid out in his mind, and connected most of the dots as the story moved through. It was compelling enough that I finished the book. I just got frustrated having to try to re-read sections to keep relationships straight, characters straight, actions straight that might have made more sense if the story were in longer bites.
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