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Posted March 10, 2012
Awesome book...POOR editing
Great series so far and I like this book. I would love the book if the author had a better editor. They repeat things a lot in this book and the story kinda drags in the middle. One major flaw that I kept reading is that the first thing Lara did once she had her babies was drink a beer. I guess she was stressed, I get that. But right after drinking a beer she went to breast feed her babies, and this happens more than once. Now I don't know for sure, but I fairly certain you don't drink alcohol while you're nursing. But all in all it's a good book with a bad editor
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