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Posted August 4, 2014
Could have been a much better story...
This book could have been a much better story if the author put some effort into developing the characters more fully. They are very two dimensional, especially the female character. There is nothing there except that she apparently jumps any guy's (that acts like he likes her) bones on the first date. Also, she gets really insecure if he doesn't want to have sex immediately! No conversation necessary! Kind of pathetic and not a good message to women in general. There's no development of their relationship and barely any sexual tension, leading up to, what should have been, an amazing attraction. It was very disappointing. There is little or no background information given about her nor what drives her as a person. The author keeps saying she's strong but you don't get a sense that she is strong. She bounces from one guy to the next without looking back. She seems very shallow, needy and immature. Not a likeable character. Where's their connection besides her libido? Marcus is a bit more developed. He could have been an amazing character, but even he falls a bit flat in the end. Disappointing overall.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted August 29, 2014
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