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Posted March 23, 2012
Coulda Been, Shoulda Been
This could have been a good story, but the author missed out on several points:Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
1. Venacular totally unrealistic...Ex gang members, even if they're undercover using Correct English. I mean not even a contraction.
2. Characters undeveloped and very stiff.
3. Sisters trying to be "down" come off as "corney".