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Posted December 17, 2013
Good story line, needs editing
While this had a good story line, it was desperately in need of better editing. The spelling errors weren't as bad as some, but there were too many occasions of sentences with missing or added words and incorrect tense (i.e., "his hand touched touching her lower back."). About half way through the book, I found myself skipping large sections of description in an attempt to move the story along. I would probably reread this book and any sequels if there was major editing.
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