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Posted April 12, 2010
If this was an attempt to write as Carl Hiaasen, the book falls far short. Character development is next to non-existent even for the main character. Definitely not a redeemed character as proclaimed by the review.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
We were hoping the personalities would be better examined than in even previous books by the author but found this even less. Being a local writer, we were "pulling" for her but were sorely disappointed,
Posted September 5, 2009
By "too wordy" I mean that every sentence of this book seems to be filled with way too many adjectives or cultural metaphors...so much so that I found myself having to read some of the page twice to be sure I knew who was talking or what was being discussed. Unorganized and hard to follow for sure. Honestly, I lost interest before chapter 5 and have not read the entire book. I probably won't read it.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.