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Posted February 12, 2014
Ridiculous.So short it failed on every level. It could have been
Ridiculous.So short it failed on every level. It could have been a great epic adventureWas this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
if he had expanded on the mythology,the dominion,and well,the whole novel.I had no idea i bought 130 page ebook. Disappointed!
Posted October 13, 2012
Mr Wood, stop while you are ahead.... expand this story into a full novel...
While i understand that this is a short story more than it is a novel i was disappointed how the story progressed and ended. Ive read all four of the Dane books and think this last one should have been shelved until a full novel was written. Maybe intriduce this story 1/4 written as a prologue to the novel so that fans get a taste of whats to come....then write the rest...Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
I say pass on this one as in my opinion it doesnt do the series justice.
A side note, while all four Dane books need better editing, this story seemed to have significantly more gramatical errors than the other three, and i'm a techie not an english major... posted via nook... no spell check :)