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Posted July 24, 2011
Interesting storyline, juvenile writing style.
I loved the idea behind this story, and there was some depth to the characters. Not a lot of follow through for that depth, tho. The e-book was about 500 pages, the first pg of the story started on pg 20, and every time you turn a pg it skips 2. So basically I turn pg 2 and thr next pg is 4. Which means the story was only about 230 long. Just a heads up there. Also, I'm sorry, but how many times do you need to say "sexual urges" in a book, or on each page for that matter. That's what came off as juvenile to me. The author repeats the same thing over again. And while their are hints of emotional and personal issues in the story, they disappear just as quickly as they are introduced. Overall, the author has potential, but this story needed a lot of updating and editing before it got published.
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Posted March 11, 2011
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