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LS: Deception

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Most Helpful Favorable Review

3 out of 3 people found this review helpful.

highly recommend

Story was a little slow to start. I was confused as to the actuall story. But it picked up and was fast paced. Loved the book. Can't wait for the next one.

posted by d155890 on August 31, 2011

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Most Helpful Critical Review

1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

Good

There were many typos. The first hundred or so pages were boring, as well as a few other areas of the book. Thankfully it picked back up by the end.

I often found myself getting annoyed with the characters, especially Stephen, but admit I'm curious to see how the stor...
There were many typos. The first hundred or so pages were boring, as well as a few other areas of the book. Thankfully it picked back up by the end.

I often found myself getting annoyed with the characters, especially Stephen, but admit I'm curious to see how the story continues in the next book.

posted by Buma on December 14, 2012

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  • Posted October 28, 2011

    A Must Read

    Stephen arrives at his place of birth after a long period of time in living in Africa. The moment he steps into his new city, Sloutenville, he begins to undergo certain changes. Changes he could never have dreamed of. (by the way I like the name of the town, kelvin)

    I love the part where he meets Lisa: how their eyes change colors will be awesome in big screen(just saying). Anyways, I get to see Stephen and Lisa learn about each other's super powers. I love the relationship between Stacey and Stephen.

    Now, there were some questions left unanswered. I didn't fancy this to be honest, but then I realized it's written in a first person narrative voice, so even Stephen doesn't know the answers to these questions. It made me feel as if I was traveling with Lisa and Stephen in this romantic/mysterious adventure.

    I've downloaded the second book to my Kindle device, and I'll start reading it as soon as possible. Well done, kelvin

    3 out of 3 people found this review helpful.

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  • Posted October 23, 2011

    An amazing read

    Stephen and Lisa are college kids who possess the ability to create the two elements, water and fire, respectively.

    To be honest, I had to read this book for the second time to get a glimpse of its story line. It seemed lame at first, but when I read it the second time, I was like... OMG. This writer has something in store for his readers. I mean, it's hard to pinpoint what exactly is going on.

    i would have loved to expatiate but I don't want to add spoilers. It's really a good read. There's romance, jealousy, cheat, and action. I really like this adventure, and can't wait to read the next in the series

    2 out of 2 people found this review helpful.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted November 6, 2012

    Great read

    I wasnt sure when i got this one how it would be, but i found myself unable to put it down.

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  • Posted November 25, 2011

    Amazing Paranormal Series

    Woo, this was intense. I had to read it twice to understand more about these two characters(Lisa and Stephen). Kelvin answered some questions from the prequel, LS: The Beginning. In this book, we see Lisa and Stephen face so many obstacles. Some mystical, others natural. My best chapter was when they had their first kiss (: Sadly, I won't disclose any further. You need to read the first book to clearly understand this. I hope this book gets transformed into a movie. Can't wait for 'The Final Battle'

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  • Posted November 3, 2011

    Highly recommend- You must check out this series

    I really enjoyed reading this book. I feel the author has grown better in his writing skills. I loved the twist in this book, the action and the romance. I could hardly put my nook down throughout the read. When reading 'The Beginning', I thought it was all paranormal. Now, i'm seeing a bit of magic in this book. It's just awesome. I can't wait to read the next book of the series. Loved it. Loved it. Loved it.

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  • Posted October 29, 2011

    Highly recommended

    I won this book as a goodreads giveaway and I loved it! The story is so original! The characters are great, the story line keeps you wondering what's going to happen next and the cliff hanger is awesome but terrible because now u have to wait for the sequel! I can't wait to read what happens to Stephen and Lisa, the love they have for eachother tells me that something great is to come. Well done Kelvin!

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  • Anonymous

    Posted December 2, 2012

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