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Posted May 31, 2013
Losing ground... very fast!
Pretty disapointed with the writter and story line... less preachy than the first book, which was nice but overall the writer's ability to make a realistic story line is quite pathetic. Among many obvious spelling and gramatical errors, I was thoroughly irritated with obvious poor choices of events (like the abusive drug lord attack in the woods... who runs for their life in the woods from men with guns and escapes to go get coffee instead of telling the police? Well you'll see... it is pretty idiotic). Overall I felt this sequel was a nice attempt, but really failed at weaving events together to form a cohesive storyline. I will read the third book because I am pretty stubborn, but am severly questioning who is more pathetic.... me or the writer?
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