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Posted January 13, 2013
Posted January 10, 2013
28 pg short story, lots of spelling and grammatical errors.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
The action in this story was very difficult to follow. I had a great deal of trouble following the characters. The action was very jerky from one scene to the next.
There was no flow to the action or the story.
Posted November 16, 2012