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Posted February 17, 2013
The Plot Line Could Move Faster...
After reading the overview, I was intrigued with the idea of the story. Alas, found myself reading a very slow plot line. After reading the first five pages, I found I could skip clear to page 95 without missing anything. The expose of the characters is disconnected, and too much space is devoted to describing the sweeping vistas of Israel. The story's action finally picks up on page 136, but doesn't really develop. The story does have a happy ending, but it isn't very climatic.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
The one bright spot of the story is that it presents an appropriate backdrop to some of the ideas the author wishes to convey. All the same, I felt it could have been done in less than 100 pages.