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Posted March 10, 2012
Again with the editing
In the first book it was ok, the second the editor got slowly lazier and in this book it's like they quite.......(CAUTION: the next line is a spoiler)....Jergan killed Hans and Frank is supposed to be fighting Karl...so why, when it comes to the fight scene, is Frank fighting HANS?????? Might I remind you Hans is already dead. After that major editing mistake I just quit reading.....Please for the sake of the reading audience, find a new editor.
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