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Mortal Obligation: Book One of the Dark Betrayal Trilogy

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Most Helpful Favorable Review

12 out of 13 people found this review helpful.

My Summary: Since her brother's death, seventeen year old Ree ha

My Summary:
Since her brother's death, seventeen year old Ree has had disturbing dreams and always feels like she is being watched. She doesn't understand what's happening. All she wants, is to get through high school. Then there is her brother's best friend Paden. He's...
My Summary:
Since her brother's death, seventeen year old Ree has had disturbing dreams and always feels like she is being watched. She doesn't understand what's happening. All she wants, is to get through high school. Then there is her brother's best friend Paden. He's promised to watch over Ree, but she wants more than friendship. She's loved him since she was a child. One night when they head out to a concert, Ree and Paden feel like they are being watched. Turns out, that the "people" watching her want to destroy Ree before she can save the world. She had no idea that she was the answer to protecting the world from darkness. Ree has guardians, who turn out to be her friends. Her guardians are the descendants of Gods. As she reveals the truth about her destiny, not only does she find her heart torn between two guys, but more surprises will be revealed.

My Take:
I feel like it's been a while since I've read a vampire story. Honestly, I wasn't sure what to expect. What I liked was that the vampires were different than other vamp stories. I also like that there is mythology tied into the story. There's also a bit of magic too. A well rounded mix, that brings the story together nicely in the end.

When I first met Ree, I felt a bit sad for her. Not only is she a bit of a loner at school, but her family is so distraught over her brother's death, that they kind forget about her. However, once she starts to learn the truth about who she is, she really steps up to the plate. There is nothing worse to me than a whiny heroine and thank goodness Ree handles all these changes with a kick butt attitude.

On to my favorite part of the story....PADEN. I'm the type of gal that focuses a lot on the boys in the book. Are you shocked? If I don't feel a connection to the lead guy right away, the story drags a bit for me. Luckily for me, I fell for Paden pretty much immediately. I mean, I got a little irritated with him from time to time with the whole, "I can't date you because, you are my friend's sister." deal, but he redeemed himself. I love that Paden is her main protector. He's so fiercely devoted to keeping Ree safe that it made me swoon more than once.

Now, there is another fellow, Roland, that enters the scene to make things a bit challenging for Paden. In fact, I think he pushed Paden into confessing his feelings for Ree, because he was jealous of Roland. I can see the benefit to having Roland in the story and there is definitely a strong connecting story between Roland and Ree, but I'm just not loving him. Paden is my choice, hands down.

As for the story, I admit, the flow was smooth, but I kept waiting for "the" moment that I would be wowed. I felt the connection to the characters, but I needed that special something to make me love the story. The first moment came when you begin to understand the possible connection between Ree and Roland. It should definitely make for an interesting twist as the story continues. The second moment for me came at the end. What a great ending! I admit that I had some suspicion about what happened, but once it happened, I wanted to keep reading to see what would happen next.

My final thoughts are: the writing was great, I connected to the characters, and I look forward to the next book in the trilogy, Mortal Defiance. I feel like this is a great read for the YA community. If you are looking for a good mix of paranormal characters with a twist, this is a great pick for you. I really look forward to reading Mortal Defiance. I can't wait to see what happens next!

posted by TheAutumnReview on May 23, 2012

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Most Helpful Critical Review

1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

its a good book

I like this book very much.. I just couldn't put it down

posted by KaylaCA on January 5, 2012

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  • Anonymous

    Posted January 22, 2014

    Anonymous

    Nah, apart from all its flaws, this book just wasn't for me. I did like how the characters didn't start off with their powers and had to gain them, but thats pretty much the only positive thing I have to say about this book. Everything I thought was important wasn't discussed or even considered by the main chatacter, like the fact that her friends are immortal and will have to watch her die (as shes the only human among them and will age normally), but she in turn will have to watch herself age and will be forced to either move on with her life and give up the friends she fought with, or struggle to deal with their changing realationship and the fact that they will live on forever without her, eventually forgotten. You would think that having such disturbing things looming in your future would be something that would upset the main character more than her dating life, but apparently not. Issues like this were the main reason I gave this book one star. After some thought though I decided to rate this book at two stars, the extra one giving because I was feeling generous and to compinsate for me not liking this particular type of fantasy.

    1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted January 21, 2013

    Derp

    She doesnt ACT like an adult so why does she Expect him to Treat her like one? Stubborn my ass. She's selfish. There is a big-time difference between being stubborn and being selfish.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted November 22, 2011

    Not very good

    It was ok, it had some good parts.The twist was good, wasnt expecting it. i loved roland.. still,barely kept me entertained though.

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    Posted January 22, 2012

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    Posted July 24, 2013

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