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Posted March 27, 2010
Not that great ...
This was very simply written. It's kind of good news in a backwards way that anyone has the possiblity of writing and publishing a book if you just have a story, but does not as yet have any type of style or craft as a writer.
I finished reading it in the hope it would get better or more interesting, or that the author's ability would improve, but it didn't.
The "Story" itself could have been made into a great book if a better or a more accomplished author wrote it.
Perhaps if this author keeps creating interesting stories and adds to those stories characters with some depth, or weaving in some sense of "being there" instead of just "describing" what is happening ... then ... future books may be good.
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