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Posted August 14, 2013
Passably Entertaining Issue
This is the first issue of eFantasy that I have ever read and I found it passably entertaining. "Fourth Point" had a clever premise, but was awkwardly constructed. "Lottery #2" had an intrrestiing setting, but so few explanatory details that I was lost for most of the story. Additionally, there were quite a few formatting errors, eg extraneous commas, words running together, even completely incorrect words.Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
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