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Posted December 27, 2012
I love how you incorporated your name into the story! Most cats and humans I know cannot do that! You had some spelling and grammar mistakes, but besides that, a wonderful tale. On the numbers you put, it makes for better writing to put instead of 1, one, and so on for the other numbers. That just makes the story flow. Incredible job! Do not repost your story. That is just so many other cats and humans can read your story too! Awesome job!Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.