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Once Upon Another World

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  • Anonymous

    Posted July 6, 2012

    Bravo! For an awesome first novel.

    Shiva Winters Once Upon Another World The title and the cover almost had me thinking 'fairy tale'. Once I dove in feet first it was more like Zelazny's Amber series and Farmers Tier series rolled together and given a special Shiva Winters touch. Raven Sinclar is a powerful character well matched by his counterpart LeShana, who is not only lovely but also as powerful and kick-ass as Raven. Suffice it to say, I loved this book, and there is only one reason I give it 4 stars instead of five. There are so many errors in spelling, grammar, and questionable usage of some words and missing words- sometimes extra words that just don't belong there. I can live with some of this in dialogue- no one speaks perfectly all the time. But it leaks heavily into the narrative portion and that gets me to believing that maybe those characters don't really speak that way either. This book is offered free, but as a representative of self publishing it could have used a bit of polish. (Another couple of pairs of eyes.)A number of people I know might toss this book down after the first 50 pages and that's their loss. One thing I disagree with other people about is that an editor could have pared it down some. I'm not a fan of muting the authors voice. An edit will help the spelling grammar and other but the author's work should stand unless the author decides some portions might not be necessary or should be reworked. I did not see anything that just jumped out at me and said I don't belong here. As it stands Once Upon Another World is a well packed novel with a fairly tight plot that has plenty of twists to keep the reader guessing. It also demonstrates some skill in world making that Shiva should be proud of. She has a writing style that I was comfortable with, though I'll need to read more of her work to see if the style changes as she becomes more polished. If this book ever goes to paper print copy I would suggest a strong look at some editing and a signed copy for me. Bravo! For an awesome first novel. J.L. Dobias Author of Cripple-Mode: Hot Electric

    3 out of 4 people found this review helpful.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted September 2, 2012

    Interesting

    Was hard to follow at times. Read authors notes at end it will help.

    1 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted April 6, 2013

    Excellent

    I was amazed at how quickly I read this 800+ page book! The storyline moves quickly, twisting and turning. Some twist you see coming and some are a surprise. Great characters and a little humor thrown in.

    The book could use a good proof reader to fix the typos, spelling errors, and editing mistakes, but they didn't really detract from the story and certainly were not as bad as some other reviewers indicated. Although the consistent apostrophe added to "its" (third person possessive) did irritate me.

    I look forward to more of this author's work.

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  • Anonymous

    Posted February 17, 2013

    3 stars

    Ok book...but the bad grammer and spelling are really starting to wear on me. Ever heard of spell check/grammer check?

    0 out of 1 people found this review helpful.

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    Posted October 23, 2012

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