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Posted July 23, 2014
The Partner Legacies: The Meeting
Told in third-person POV by Cyrus. These are actual Nook events. <p> The Meeting <p> Cyrus felt a slight tap on his shoulder. He slowly stands and turns, facing a stranger. "Umm. Who are you?" He notices a sword at the stranger's side. "Please don't hurt me. I've got nothing to give you." He backs away slowly. The stranger just stands there, his eyebrow raised. "What? I don't wanna hurt you. Look see...." He unbuckles his sword belt and drops it on the ground. "My name is Kenny. Yours is?" Cyrus carefully eyes Kenny, walking back towards him. "Cyrus. Can you help me with something?" Kenny frowns. "Sure. What do you need?" Cyrus smiles, relaxing a bit. "I'm looking for a man named Zeus. Heard of him?" Kenny suddenly looks up. "I want him dead! He seperated me from my family!" Cyrus nods. "Me too. He killed my parents." Cyrus smirks. "Let's help each..." Suddenly, Cyrus just disappears. Kenny frowns, looking around. "What the....hey!" He stands. "Where did he go?" He sighs, refastening his sword belt. <p> Elsewhere.... <p> Cyrus appeared in large, torch lit cavern. A large throne made from black obsidian sat against a wall. A bulky figure was sitting in the throne. Cyrus gulped, unsure of what to do. He bows his head slightly, a sign of respect. "Well then," The figure says, rising slowly. "It seems my son has returned." He chuckles, his voice very deep and commanding. Cyrus takes a couple steps back, his body trembling with fear. "D-d-dad?" He stammers. "My father's name was Edi. I don't even know you." The figure let's out a loud, booming laugh. "Edi, and Sarah adopted you, from me. My name....is Lord Kronos." Cyrus' eyes widen and he drops to his knees. "Kronos......you're my father?" Kronos smiles, stepping down from the throne and walking towards Cyrus. "Yes, I am your father, and I have a gift for you." Kronos turns to a side door and yells, "HYPERION!!" Cyrus, shocked by Kronos' revelation, doesn't listen and just stares at the ground. "Yes Lord Kronos?" A man, clad in bright golden armor and a golden sword at his side, strides over to Kronos, his back towards Cyrus. "Welcome brother." He turns Hyperion towards Cyrus. "Cyrus this is my brother, Zeus." Hyperion frowns. "Wait, I'm not," He's cut off by a nudge from Kronos. Cyrus, now paying attention, leaped up and eyed Hyperion angrily. "You're Zeus?" Hyperion simply nods. Cyrus nods, smirking. "Good." With lightning speed, he draws Hyperion's sword and lunges, stabbing him through his gut and twisting the blade inside him. "AGHHHH!" Hyperion falls to his knees, looking up at Kronos. "Brother? Why?" Kronos, smirks, satisfied. "Because my son is a more valuble asset than you ever could be." Kronos chuckles, watching Hyperion crumble to dust. "Cyrus, that was my brother, Hyperion, not Zeus. Now that Hyperion is dead, you will now be known as, Cyrus, Lord of the Sun. Now go! Have your revenge on the Gods of Olympus!" Cyrus frowns, appearing in front of Kenny wearin Hyperion's golden armor and sword. "Kenny." Kenny jumps up, staring at Cyrus in awe. "Where did you," Cyrus cuts him off. "There's no time. We need to find a demigod camp, to lead us to Mount Olympus. We will have revenge on the gods. There will be a new world ruler. And his name is, Cyrus, Titan of the Sun." He begins to hover, then he flies off. Kenny following behind. <p> To be continued....Was this review helpful? Yes NoThank you for your feedback. Report this reviewThank you, this review has been flagged.
Posted April 23, 2013
A fluffy white cat pads in silently her grey eyes searching. She asks to be coleader. For a sign of strength she leaves for ten minutes and drags three dead bears back to camp. Willowmist
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